The Unknown Package
Dear Year 4, It has been wonderful to read the positive comments you have been making about Ryan’s narrative and we are really enjoying reading the narratives that you are posting for us to share. This week we would like to share with you a narrative written by Elijah which we are sure you will all enjoy. It is called “The Unknown Package”. In this story Elijah travels into the future, tickles aliens and saves the world. We look forward to answering your questions about Australia.
June 21st, 2008 at 2:38 pm
Hi Elijah,my name is Michelle .Your narrative was brilliant and i like the bit where it says “What ,thats not i wanted!” it expresses how you feel by the exclaimation mark.
G’day Elijah
June 26th, 2008 at 8:04 pm
Hi Elijah,
That was a fantastic story and hope to see more sooner or later! Plaese. My favourite part was when you mensioned you travelling into the future, tickles aliens and saves the world.
Regards
Caitlyn