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Year4 Chapter Stories with a problem/issue/dilemma

Hi Year 3,

Year 4 are finishing their chapter stories with a dilemma. The children read a poem about doing a bad thing by Alan Ahlberg. They then created a story based on that poem. We have posted it on this blog for you to read and enjoy. The children have worked very hard to create these stories in pairs.

Once I did the most terrible thing – By Ethan and Ashley (This is about breaking a window)

Once I did a bad thing – By Michelle and George (This is about stealing money for a mouse)

Once I did a bad thing – By Joe and Laksiya (This is about stealing money for a Nintendo DS)

Once I did a bad thing – by Ellenjoy and Shane (This is about stealing fairyfloss)

The Beach

Hello Year 4,

Year 3 have just finished learning about narratives. Ryan a student in our class would like to share a narrative that he wrote all by himself. The title of his story is ‘The Beach’. We thought you might like to read it and you can make a comment about it for Ryan and our class to read. We hope you enjoy it!

The Beach